Comments on: Cold and Gone

By: Al_Pal

Al_Pal — Sun, 30 May 2010 03:30:18 +0000

Snaperdoodles, girl. This is beautiful. And sad. ;p

By: Finn

Finn — Wed, 09 Dec 2009 17:54:59 +0000

Excellent. Very well written and well conceived. Brava!

By: Secret Agent Mishi

Secret Agent Mishi — Tue, 08 Dec 2009 22:34:49 +0000

This is the voice of a 9 year old girl. You did an exceptional job with this, Dawn! xo

By: flutter

flutter — Tue, 08 Dec 2009 20:56:07 +0000

this is AMAZING

By: patois

patois — Tue, 08 Dec 2009 15:25:23 +0000

That was fabulous. Truly well done.

By: Mrs. Flinger

Mrs. Flinger — Tue, 08 Dec 2009 06:11:34 +0000

This is your voice. I love it.

By: amber

amber — Tue, 08 Dec 2009 03:17:05 +0000

Wow. I wasn’t expecting that twist at the end. Great job!

By: melissa

melissa — Tue, 08 Dec 2009 02:32:45 +0000

i’m absolutely amazed.
i have no words to tell you how terrific this story is!!

By: Jennifer, Playgroups are no place for children

Jennifer, Playgroups are no place for children — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 22:23:35 +0000

SO GOOD, DAWN!! I love how you told the story, through a child’s voice. This is one of those stories I’d love to read more of…

By: Annie Anderson

Annie Anderson — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 21:31:08 +0000

Fascinating tale! I can relate to that nine-year old – I liked school and books.

By: Kelly

Kelly — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 19:04:08 +0000

I could hear the nine-year-old voice in this, which was really fantastic. I also really enjoyed hearing how this young girl explained her fascinating lineage. Thanks for sharing!

By: LSM

LSM — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 17:58:28 +0000

The voice in this story, like the one in your past family history writing, is wonderful. I’m still hoping to learn more about the women in the house that you wrote about a while back. I think there’s a novel in there!

By: Brigid

Brigid — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 17:23:33 +0000

Wow. Great story. (I hate raw meat on my hands too. Ewww.)